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pai...studiez la un colegiu in brighton,scoala a organizat o excursie in edinburgh si sunt printre cei care s'au dus in excursie.iar acum directorul scolii imi cere sa scriu un report despre excursie deoarece el a auzit reactii diverse de la copii precum(including some criticisms as well as prise.the social club would like to organise similar trips in !! so i would be greteful if you could write a report for me.we want to know what problems there were as well as what aspects of the trip were sussessful.perhaps you could also suggest how we could do better in !!(sam samson president)...si imi da niste repere:
See a completely different part of britain!
enjoy the beautiful scenery!
listen to musical scottish accents!(better if we had practice before)
sunday:coach to london,arrive at hotel(faster by train?)
free time in evening(some wanted organised event on first evening)

monday:train to edinburgh(save time by taking sleeper)

tuesday:guided tour city(great!)

wednesday:Day at MacTavish college
lectures on scottish culture(some youun students bored)
language classes(a bit hard for most)

thur: free day,scottish country dancing in evening(everyone loved it)
friday: edingburgh's museums and art galleries(interesting,but too much for one day)
saturday:back to london,then brighton
cam astea sunt cerintele...dak ma puteti ajuta cu niste idei cum sa incep cu niste paragrafe...va multumesc mult de tot...ce am scris in paranteze la program sunt ideile date de carte dupa care trebuie sa concep report-ul(ce le'a placut elevilor in excursie si ce nu)multumesc

pai leaga intr-un eseu acele repere...
spune ca ai facut excursia aia, si imagineaza-ti cum ar fi fost fiecare aspect in parte... formeaza-ti  o opinie (ti-a placut sau nu) si pe baza ei dezvolta...
e un exercitiu de imaginatie

trebuie un eseu de 250 de cuvinte...dar nu stiu sa fac introducerea ma gandeam sa scriu ceva de genul...the aim of this report is to describe my trip in edinburgh dar numai stiu ce sa scriu in continuare ca sa pot incepe eseul propriu-zis

eu nu ma prea pricep la engleza... dar cred ca ai putea sa incepi cu ceva de genul (m-am adresat directorului)
" acum cateva luni mi-ati oferit ocazia sa vizitez edinburgh-ul. La momentul respectiv am fost foarte incantata ca am fost printre cei selectionati si am acceptat imediat aceasta oportunitate.
am plecat din brighton la ora ........, si am ajuns la hotel la ora ... " si povestesti ce ai facut... ce ti-a placut si ce nu